Monday, May 14, 2007


when all is empty, white.

something quiet, comes weilding a bloody knife.

Drops of silence, shatter the screaming mind,

after red devours the icy black,


Those eyes look at me, I crave the innocence they betray in a glance...

I sit in my weightless fantasy, and wait for another breathless day

It never comes, I build those castles in rainless air,

cannot breath anymore, like a fish is murky waters

I wait in agonising pain, for death to come in slow fantastic waves..

It feels like a dream, yet real it is.. I keep dancing with those flowing melodies, that whisper in my ear..some far away wooden song..

Voices in the water...

songs in the snow

i hear them all so close

its time to go...

I let go..

and fly..not fall..

its up.. they told me it wud be down..

higher and higher...

forever..all of eternity.. death.. and beyond...




4 Comments:

At 1:32 AM , Blogger Prmod Bafna said...

Wow!! soaring and beautifully exhilarating piece this! what a piercing way to break the silence!!! Keep on rocking!!! :)

Cheers!!

 
At 12:42 AM , Blogger alice said...

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At 12:58 AM , Blogger alice said...

"I wait in agonising pain, for death to come in slow fantastic waves.."

Love this line in particular, mach...that the line is used as a perlude to an end in hope...awesome

btw added to comment hence del last
:)

 
At 4:38 AM , Blogger Euphoria said...

Hey Tarang,

So Abstract, Yet so Strong. Really impressive. What U've written may sound a li'l complex. Simply put, the meaning as to what U wanna convey ( i.e. if u've written with a reason )is so simple. Seems lik U luv writin n i must confess U have an awesome set of words in UR dictionary !

Feelin of complete-ness ! Yet its incomplete. Wonderful flow of thoughts. Suprizingly... i've read it as if i've written this !!

Great Stuff.
- Euphoria

 

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