when all is empty, white.
something quiet, comes weilding a bloody knife.
Drops of silence, shatter the screaming mind,
after red devours the icy black,
Those eyes look at me, I crave the innocence they betray in a glance...
I sit in my weightless fantasy, and wait for another breathless day
It never comes, I build those castles in rainless air,
cannot breath anymore, like a fish is murky waters
I wait in agonising pain, for death to come in slow fantastic waves..
It feels like a dream, yet real it is.. I keep dancing with those flowing melodies, that whisper in my ear..some far away wooden song..
Voices in the water...
songs in the snow
i hear them all so close
its time to go...
I let go..
and fly..not fall..
its up.. they told me it wud be down..
higher and higher...
forever..all of eternity.. death.. and beyond...
4 Comments:
Wow!! soaring and beautifully exhilarating piece this! what a piercing way to break the silence!!! Keep on rocking!!! :)
Cheers!!
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"I wait in agonising pain, for death to come in slow fantastic waves.."
Love this line in particular, mach...that the line is used as a perlude to an end in hope...awesome
btw added to comment hence del last
:)
Hey Tarang,
So Abstract, Yet so Strong. Really impressive. What U've written may sound a li'l complex. Simply put, the meaning as to what U wanna convey ( i.e. if u've written with a reason )is so simple. Seems lik U luv writin n i must confess U have an awesome set of words in UR dictionary !
Feelin of complete-ness ! Yet its incomplete. Wonderful flow of thoughts. Suprizingly... i've read it as if i've written this !!
Great Stuff.
- Euphoria
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